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very detailed choices, liked how it started with the villain, was interesting. but i'm kinda sad we didn't get to see any of the love interests. for my curiosity's sake I hope this is updated soon.

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Is this still ongoing or? It's good so wondering if it's still a thing or not to get my hopes up lol

Lovely but need more

So captivating, shame that there is so little. Hope you continue :)

This is really good! I love the way you write ;-;

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it!!! You're a sweetheart!!!

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Hey I really liked the demo. I have one question though, the latest development log post says it was supposed to be updated May 31, but it hasn't been was there some kind of delay or is the updated version somewhere else?

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Hello! Yes, there was a delay, there was a bit of an emergency and I wasn't able to get it out. I'm hoping to get it out soon. Thank you for the question!

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Woah. That was... vivid. I had to stop at the description of the choice for blue eyes. If thats not poetry I dont know what is.

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oh my gosh, thank you so much!! I really appreciate it!!

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God I luv how detailed and unique each choices are.  Cannot wait to find out moreeeeee!

I'm so glad you liked it!! Thank you for the feedback!!

Dear god that was graphic. But I loved it. Without dwelling on what that says about me as a person, I'm just going to say, "great job" and "I'm looking forward to the rest!"

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Thank you so much for the kind comments!! And don't worry, we're in the same boat, I'm sure it says more about me IUFSDHIUD💀



Aaaaa it was so nice! But quite short...i hope to read more of this, keep going!

I'm so glad you liked it!! I hope to update more soon, so look forward to it :-0 hope you'ree having a great day!!

bro were they trying to murder us but mistook our mother for us?

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Perhaps ;-) Or perhaps not! You’ll have to find out!

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arrrrr, it was so short ! But it's frustrating 'cause it's good !I honestly love the writing, and I already love the shaping of our character, I can really identify !
Anyway, can't wait to see more ! (please write more.)
Aaand of to sleep. Love !

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💗💗thank you so much, I’m so happy you enjoyed it! And don’t worry about the length, now that I know how to use twine fully I aim to have a longer chapter where you get to meet the ROs by the end of April, and to get chapter 3 also uploaded by the end of May! I hope you’re having an excellent day!!

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Hello, you need to enable  scrollbars so you can play in edit game. And I like your game. Good luck

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Yeah, I can't read more than the first screen... it seems great but... T-T

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thank you for letting me know! I will fix that right away!

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it should be fixed now😊